I like the theme of the video. It goes well with the song. Some shots were a bit out of focus, and a few times you cut to shots that weren't quite different enough from the prior shot to be cohesive. But overall, it's good.
Focus before starting to record and also make sure you can get the entire body in the frame before starting the camera. Loved your take on the song!! It was sad in the end, but comical in the beginning when he was looking for clothes. I like how you almost ended with a cliffhanger because we never saw if she replied.
I really liked the concept of the video!! it's cute but sad how it ended. I really like that effect of the message popping up on the screen. Just some areas where the lens was focused but overall great video!
I thought you had some very good camera angles, paired with a variety of shots. My favorite was the last one where he is walking away with the flowers laying on the ground!
The video went with the song very well! The edits were tight and cut on the beat a lot. I liked a lot of the angles you shot from also. There was just one shot that the camera person had their hand in buuuut other than that it was really cleans and a clear piece! Good work!
I really liked the use of the text bubbles for the phone rather than showing a phone screen. The editing was really good, especially when the main character is getting dressed and ready to go, and I liked the polt twist in the end when he got stood up.
The story line was great. Not sure that what was going on really matched the song that well. I felt his struggle getting changed but I felt there could of been a bit more. I don't feel the actions matched the song.
I liked your concept and think the video turned out great! It made me sad at the end. I liked the text messages on the screen, that worked out really well! There were only a few things that stood out to me that would have made the video better. I feel like there was too much time spent on your subject trying on clothes. I would have liked to see him buying flowers or stuff like that. There were also a few shots out of focus and some jump cuts. Overall though the video was great!
I like the bit of humor you added to this, and how some of the shots had him tossing shirts to the beat. The few pans were nice to show the motion without just having to cut to different shots, but there was one shot that appeared to have a bit of a finger in it before it cut out. At one point it did seem as if the focus changed significantly between two shots, but the storyline wasn't impacted. Overall I enjoyed the concept, well done!
10/10 so good - not biased at all ;)
ReplyDeleteLoved the texting images and idea. It was really cute. I absolutely loved the last shot.
ReplyDeleteI like the theme of the video. It goes well with the song. Some shots were a bit out of focus, and a few times you cut to shots that weren't quite different enough from the prior shot to be cohesive. But overall, it's good.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you got the messages to appear on the screen!
ReplyDeleteReally nicely done! You got the point across really well and it was a cute and casual video. Good job (:
ReplyDeleteFocus before starting to record and also make sure you can get the entire body in the frame before starting the camera. Loved your take on the song!! It was sad in the end, but comical in the beginning when he was looking for clothes. I like how you almost ended with a cliffhanger because we never saw if she replied.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the concept of the video!! it's cute but sad how it ended. I really like that effect of the message popping up on the screen. Just some areas where the lens was focused but overall great video!
ReplyDeleteI thought you had some very good camera angles, paired with a variety of shots. My favorite was the last one where he is walking away with the flowers laying on the ground!
ReplyDeleteGood continuity, the story was easily guessed. Though the un-zooming shot bugged me since it wasn't even, yet the finger was comedic glory :)
ReplyDeleteThe video went with the song very well! The edits were tight and cut on the beat a lot. I liked a lot of the angles you shot from also. There was just one shot that the camera person had their hand in buuuut other than that it was really cleans and a clear piece! Good work!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the use of the text bubbles for the phone rather than showing a phone screen. The editing was really good, especially when the main character is getting dressed and ready to go, and I liked the polt twist in the end when he got stood up.
ReplyDeleteThe story line was great. Not sure that what was going on really matched the song that well. I felt his struggle getting changed but I felt there could of been a bit more. I don't feel the actions matched the song.
ReplyDeleteI liked your concept and think the video turned out great! It made me sad at the end. I liked the text messages on the screen, that worked out really well! There were only a few things that stood out to me that would have made the video better. I feel like there was too much time spent on your subject trying on clothes. I would have liked to see him buying flowers or stuff like that. There were also a few shots out of focus and some jump cuts. Overall though the video was great!
ReplyDeleteI like the bit of humor you added to this, and how some of the shots had him tossing shirts to the beat. The few pans were nice to show the motion without just having to cut to different shots, but there was one shot that appeared to have a bit of a finger in it before it cut out. At one point it did seem as if the focus changed significantly between two shots, but the storyline wasn't impacted. Overall I enjoyed the concept, well done!
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