You have very clean shots. I like how upbeat your music was for the video. I think it would've been better if you faded the end instead of just cutting it out.
I loved your concept, the shots were well planned out and it seems that some preparation and thoughtfulness really went into the making of the video. I also loved the soundtrack to chose, well done!
I like how the coffee scenes are from your point of view. I think it could be even better if you change scenes when the music has that dramatic change.
If you are showing happiness through enjoying morning coffee and the beach is good. I am really not sure about the shot of the shell. If it was meant to be used as a memento of going to the beach then I understand.
If I understand it correctly, the seashell triggers a memory that takes you away to the beach as you drink your coffee. That's a cool way to tell the viewer why you're moving so far away from the initial scene.
I really enjoyed everything that was in this video. The sense of relax in every nature shot. It looked almost for a while that every time you drank coffee you went to a different destination. Good work!
I think this video really conveyed the emotion well! One problem I had with it was the beach shot. I thought it was too long and it took me out of the video. It seemed like it was supposed to be a daydreaming type of thing, but it didn't really work for me since it was such a long shot. But I thought all the shots were really nice! Good video.
I liked the pace of the video, some were a bit longer than others like the beach at sea, editing that down could have helped. The meadow was my favourite though, the movement really helped give the feel of relaxation and being at peace.
Nicely done! I liked how you ended and started on the shell. I wish there was more, and I think that you stayed on the beach scene too long. The music made me feel happy.
I really like how you did the camera from a first person perspective, because then it makes sense that you're looking out the window daydreaming of the beach. A few of your shots lasted a bit long, but that could be solved by adding a slow zoom, or even a crossfade to another shot. However, I'm not positive what emotion you were trying to express. All the shots were beautiful though, so nice work!
Your shots were amazing!!!! I felt so peaceful and the audio went great. I loved the shot of you drinking coffee.
ReplyDeleteYou have very clean shots. I like how upbeat your music was for the video. I think it would've been better if you faded the end instead of just cutting it out.
ReplyDeleteI loved your concept, the shots were well planned out and it seems that some preparation and thoughtfulness really went into the making of the video. I also loved the soundtrack to chose, well done!
ReplyDeleteI like how the coffee scenes are from your point of view. I think it could be even better if you change scenes when the music has that dramatic change.
ReplyDeleteIf you are showing happiness through enjoying morning coffee and the beach is good. I am really not sure about the shot of the shell. If it was meant to be used as a memento of going to the beach then I understand.
ReplyDeleteI wish there had been some sounds with the field and ocean scene. I understand that the music was the key factor.
ReplyDeleteIf I understand it correctly, the seashell triggers a memory that takes you away to the beach as you drink your coffee. That's a cool way to tell the viewer why you're moving so far away from the initial scene.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is definitely relaxing! And I wish I was at the beach. I feel the emotion for sure. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThe shot with the coffee was a very refreshing shot, really all the shots were. I like the shore scene a lot too. The visuals are very appealing.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed everything that was in this video. The sense of relax in every nature shot. It looked almost for a while that every time you drank coffee you went to a different destination. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI think this video really conveyed the emotion well! One problem I had with it was the beach shot. I thought it was too long and it took me out of the video. It seemed like it was supposed to be a daydreaming type of thing, but it didn't really work for me since it was such a long shot. But I thought all the shots were really nice! Good video.
ReplyDeleteLoved all your shots. The concept was translated very well. Great video.
ReplyDeleteI liked the pace of the video, some were a bit longer than others like the beach at sea, editing that down could have helped. The meadow was my favourite though, the movement really helped give the feel of relaxation and being at peace.
ReplyDeleteNicely done! I liked how you ended and started on the shell. I wish there was more, and I think that you stayed on the beach scene too long. The music made me feel happy.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did the camera from a first person perspective, because then it makes sense that you're looking out the window daydreaming of the beach. A few of your shots lasted a bit long, but that could be solved by adding a slow zoom, or even a crossfade to another shot. However, I'm not positive what emotion you were trying to express. All the shots were beautiful though, so nice work!
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